What clients are saying

Below are testimonials from just a handful of the satisfied customers that have used coverscript.com for their coverage and rewrite analysis needs.

“Lynne’s enthusiasm and obvious love of the work, coupled with her efficient ability to handle volumes of scripts without sacrificing insight and critical analysis made her a very valuable asset to our Program.”

Former Director of The Walt Disney Writing Fellowship Program, and Former Vice President, ABC Current Comedy Series, Principle Analyst, National Security Division

"Lynne is the reader to hire if you want an honest appraisal of your script that can help you make it marketable. She recognizes what works, what doesn’t and what’s missing in a script…she brings the voice of experience but she always brings a fresh perspective. Lynne catches all the details and helps you strengthen the story and keep it moving. She helped me bring a script from ‘great idea’ to ‘indie production."

D. McCormack, Ohio

Rinehart Design Studio

"She is a writer's dream: intelligent, straight-shooting feedback dispensed in a timely manner at a truly fair price."

Marty Nemko, Ph.D.

Author and columnist, San Francisco Chronicle

"I found Lynne's name on the Screenwriters Guild web page of endorsed readers. I submitted my first attempt at writing a screenplay to Lynne in late 2003 for analysis, a prequel to a Sci-fi classic. Lynne's much appreciated frank analysis of my first attempt provided the impetus I needed to succeed. Writers, even novice ones, live and die by the stroke of a pen. Following an arduous ten-month re-write based on the results of Lynne's analysis, I was offered a contract for representation from an agency for my first screenplay last week. For once, I'm at a loss for words to thank Lynne for her help and encouragement. It will be something I will cherish forever."

Mike Weimer

Screenplay Coverage Client, Inver Grove Heights, MN

"First of all, your feedback made all the difference to our screenplay. We went through and completely revised it and sent it along to an agent in NYC who had read the earlier version. He said...Somewhere between that first version and this one you learned how to write a screenplay...I gave credit where credit was due. He's now representing it, with great enthusiasm, thanks to you."

B. F.

Screenplay Coverage Client, Santa Cruz, CA.

"As a film financier and producer I get an average of 10 script submissions a week from writers, independent producers, sales agents and distributors. Some I discard and some I pursue. I have had Lynne Pembroke doing my script reviews and coverage for about a year and can't say enough about both her professionalism and her insight into the process. At this point I've gotten to a place where I won't consider a script for funding without Lynne reviewing it."

Philip M. Cohen

Chief Creative Officer, Executive Producer, Saddle Ranch Pictures, Inc.

“Lynne helped me bridge the gap from a writer of novels to screenwriter. She worked patiently with me for over five years. During that time three of my screenplays have won screenplay festivals, and one screenplay was a four-time winner! If you’re having difficulties with plotlines, problems writing dialogue or character development, then Lynne is the person to contact!”

Joe “Tuffy” Tofuri

Screenplay coverage/development notes client

"Rewrites are tough for everybody. Lynne's analysis will reveal your script's weaknesses and suggest solutions for the rewrite. Her advice on structure and plotting is the best I've ever received. All of her notes are insightful and easy on a writer's ego. Lynne's analysis of my first two scripts resulted in them doing well in several contests, including a first place win..."

Diane Banegas

Screenplay Coverage Client

"I would absolutely rate her analytical ability and judgment as 5 out of 5."

L. J.

Director, Venice Arts Screenwriting Competition

"Lynne's feedback isn't just about pointing out flaws. It's about showing you how you can improve as a writer. My advice is to think of her services as an investment in yourself...I give all the credit to her for helping me turn the corner as a writer."

Mike Mulcahy

Screenplay Coverage Client, Semi-Finalist WriteSafe.com

"Lynne Pembroke was worth every dime. Her comments were direct, insightful and most importantly, useful. My latest script just took second place in the 2002 Scriptapalooza screenwriting competition. That wouldn't have happened without Lynne."


Screenplay Coverage Client, Westlake Village, CA.

"I knew I needed help from a professional script analyst, but I didn't want just anybody to play such an important part in the development of my work. I had five screenplays that needed coverage and notes. Establishing the relationship was as simple as clicking onto Lynne's URL. Lynne's comments were so cogent and pertinent that they could not be ignored and I can honestly say that being introduced to her is the best thing that's ever happened to my writing. Without her help, my scripts would never have attracted the kind of response they did; one optioned, another exclusively represented by a WGA Agent, and one being developed by a manager/producer. Her complete honesty is tempered by the gentle care she communicates while targeting specific problems and offering specific solutions. I highly recommend Lynne to anyone serious about moving to the next step in this business."


Screenplay Coverage Client, Valencia, California

"Lynne Pembroke was worth every dime. Her comments were direct, insightful and most importantly, useful. My latest script just took second place in the 2002 Scriptapalooza screenwriting competition. That wouldn't have happened without Lynne."


Screenplay Coverage Client, Westlake Village, CA.

"Lynne makes getting admonitions a pleasure. Her coverage is not a vague series of reproachful comments, but a detail-oriented list of points where your script rubber doesn't meet the road. Her comments are detail oriented and salient, but they are general enough to let you be creative and improve as a writer. When readers see my draft after her coverage, they all agree that the draft has improved. Though others have offered good advice, I have had consistent results with Lynne's assistance."

V. E. C.

Screenplay Coverage Client, Phoenixville, PA.

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