What clients are saying

"Lynne is the reader to hire if you want an honest appraisal of your script that can help you make it marketable. She recognizes what works, what doesn’t and what’s missing in a script…she brings the voice of experience but she always brings a fresh perspective. Lynne catches all the details and helps you strengthen the story and keep it moving. She helped me bring a script from ‘great idea’ to ‘indie production."

"She is a writer's dream: intelligent, straight-shooting feedback dispensed in a timely manner at a truly fair price."

"I found Lynne's name on the Screenwriters Guild web page of endorsed readers. I submitted my first attempt at writing a screenplay to Lynne in late 2003 for analysis, a prequel to a Sci-fi classic. Lynne's much appreciated frank analysis of my first attempt provided the impetus I needed to succeed. Writers, even novice ones, live and die by the stroke of a pen. Following an arduous ten-month re-write based on the results of Lynne's analysis, I was offered a contract for representation from an agency for my first screenplay last week. For once, I'm at a loss for words to thank Lynne for her help and encouragement. It will be something I will cherish forever."

"First of all, your feedback made all the difference to our screenplay. We went through and completely revised it and sent it along to an agent in NYC who had read the earlier version. He said...Somewhere between that first version and this one you learned how to write a screenplay...I gave credit where credit was due. He's now representing it, with great enthusiasm, thanks to you."

"As a film financier and producer I get an average of 10 script submissions a week from writers, independent producers, sales agents and distributors. Some I discard and some I pursue. I have had Lynne Pembroke doing my script reviews and coverage for about a year and can't say enough about both her professionalism and her insight into the process. At this point I've gotten to a place where I won't consider a script for funding without Lynne reviewing it."

“Lynne helped me bridge the gap from a writer of novels to screenwriter. She worked patiently with me for over five years. During that time three of my screenplays have won screenplay festivals, and one screenplay was a four-time winner! If you’re having difficulties with plotlines, problems writing dialogue or character development, then Lynne is the person to contact!”

"Rewrites are tough for everybody. Lynne's analysis will reveal your script's weaknesses and suggest solutions for the rewrite. Her advice on structure and plotting is the best I've ever received. All of her notes are insightful and easy on a writer's ego. Lynne's analysis of my first two scripts resulted in them doing well in several contests, including a first place win..."

"I would absolutely rate her analytical ability and judgment as 5 out of 5."

"Lynne's feedback isn't just about pointing out flaws. It's about showing you how you can improve as a writer. My advice is to think of her services as an investment in yourself...I give all the credit to her for helping me turn the corner as a writer."